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Reading over the document, I came up with the following comments:

par. 1, page 5, "With the proposed nomenclature..", is unclear. I would replace the phrase (in the 1st sentence) "classified and published" with "classified according to both their methodology and the characteristic(s) that they measure". I would also remove the word "Other" from the beginning of the next sentence.

par 1., section 4.4, needs some rewording to be more clear. I would start a new paragraph after the word "interchangeable":
"It is of course possible to use measurements of other characteristics to derive the values of a given characteristic. For example, available bandwidth can be defined in terms of two other characteristics, capacity and utilization (using utilization in the general sense of "traffic utilizing the path"). Available bandwidth can also be measured directly by.. <rest of text the same>.

- Dan