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new hierarchy document
Reading over the document, I came up with the following comments:
par. 1, page 5, "With the proposed nomenclature..", is unclear. I would
replace the phrase (in the 1st sentence) "classified and published" with
"classified according to both their methodology and the
characteristic(s) that they measure". I would also remove the word
"Other" from the beginning of the next sentence.
par 1., section 4.4, needs some rewording to be more clear. I would
start a new paragraph after the word "interchangeable":
"It is of course possible to use measurements of other characteristics
to derive the values of a given characteristic. For example, available
bandwidth can be defined in terms of two other characteristics, capacity
and utilization (using utilization in the general sense of "traffic
utilizing the path"). Available bandwidth can also be measured directly
by.. <rest of text the same>.
- Dan