Agree with you as Note 3 in page 5 already makes clear such difference and no additional remarks are then neccesary.-- I've removed several occurrences of "suspend" and "suspended" basicly in contexts like "revoked and suspended". IMO suspension is just a special case of revocation.
-- Section 2, p.2 removed redundant "or invalidated" from "revoked or invalidated" in
OK
-- corrected spelling of "openssl" to "OpenSSL" throughout the document
OK
-- removed (mostly my) comments from the document
OK
We have changed a little bit the original text as the spirit of such note is to make clear that a VO may integrate more than one CA an thus OCSP Authorized Responders are necesary.-- Section 3, p.3: Removed point about "establishing of authorized OCSP responders between Grid CAs" being the way to achieve interoperability and "trust relationships among Grid PKIs" - it didn't make much sense to me
-- Section 3, p.3: Removed point making requirements on the OCSP service provider - I think it belongs into "Requirements" section.
To which point are you referring? We are kind of confused about it :)
Also we have inserted a crosslink to 6.5 where the Global OCSP Redirector is first mentioned (to avoid redundance).-- Section 5.4, p.5: crosslink to Section 4 removed "Another Responder discovery solution consist of configuring a Global OCSP Redirector per domain in charge of redirecting the relying party's OCSP request according to specified parameters (i.e. OCSP load, network traffic, availability, etc.)." - it is just a special case of a local trusted responder.
-- Section 5.7
"Revoked with status Suspended or OnHold"
-> "...with revocationReason certificateHold..."
OK
-- Section 6.2 Crosslink to Section 4
OK
We have inserted a crosslink to 6.3 as a way to possibly use DeltaCRLs (Push Operation Mode) for managing Proxy Certificate Revocation. Even though we agree that such topic shall remain outside the scope of the document.-- Section 6.6 reverted the section back to Olle's version. The modified version did not make much sense to me
We believe that what happen is that when opening the document with Microsoft Word the section numbers are rearranged so that section 10 shows the following text (that we consider to be correct):
-- Section 10
is empty - I didn't succeed to persuade my OpenOffice to get rid of it ;(
We agree in deleting reference to Grid Services at this moment. However OCSP Policies proposal have the objective of "customizing" the behaviour of OCSP services in a Grid environment by defining several of the parameters mentioned in the document. At this time we are working in a prototype to show such convenience so when it is ready we may be able to send you the related information.-- Section 11 I'm not sure whether the statement of OCSP policies and Grid Services fits inot the document spirit...
-- Section 14
replaced the Authorized Responder definition by a citation form
RFC2560
- are we really going to have a Definitions section? If so, it
would probably look better if we include some more of them ;)
On a second thought this section can be deleted as the only definition
was already mentioned in sections 4 and 8.1
Regards
By the way, we have a couple of additional questions more or less
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